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100 word challenge

May 8, 2015 by Miss Mills

The prompt this week is a little different.

I want you to chose your favourite fairy story and change it in some way.

Have a read of our stories. Can you recognise the original story? How have we changed it?


  1. Mia says:

    Once upon a time there was a very famous story named Snow white and the seven dwarfs. In 1565 snow white had a daughter named Apple White. Apple had platinum blonde hair and crystal blue eyes. She grew up into a beautiful 16 year old girl. The problem is apple has to follow in her mother’s footsteps and create her own destiny. This is easy. But however raven queen doesn’t agree she wants to make her own story! This is a problem because if raven doesn’t follow, apple won’t have a happily ever after! What will apple do? YOU decide. read Raven’s side in Holly’s story.

  2. ashdon says:

    Big red riding hood
    Once upon a time there was a little boy called big red riding hood and she had to go to her grandmother’s one day and she went through a very nice little village but oh was there nasty mashers and super hearing and smelling he was trying to annoy big red but she just ignored and walked on but when she got to her grandmothers she had very b eyes and she had a very long tongue but I thought that I was hearing noises from the wardrobe It was my nan oh no ………..

  3. Aimee says:

    The three bears get REVENGE!
    It was a fine winters evening when the three bears were sitting at the golden table in the small oak cottage. The bears thought about what happened when the young blonde girl snuck into their house.
    So they invited the girl for tea.
    Soon, they heard a knock on the large wooden door, so that daddy bear could get outside because he is very tall.
    The young, pretty school girl strolled in passing the bears noticing what they were up to.
    “Is that the chair I broke?” giggled the girl.
    Then the porridge landed on her face.

  4. Nahin says:

    Once upon a time there was a little girl her name was little red riding hood. Her mother said go and give this bread to your grandpa he is very poorly. Ok little red riding hood said. When she was walking through the woods she thought that she heard a monster. Then she actually saw a monster. Little red riding hood screamed and shivered then she walked on slowly finally after a creepy walk through the woods she finally got to grandpa’s house. Grandpa looked big little red riding hood said what big eyes mouth and teeth you have grandpa all to eat you a woodcutter heard the screaming and wacked the monster then grandpa came out then grandpa and little red riding hood had supper

  5. Joshua says:

    Little natsu riding hood
    So there was a beautiful day Nastu was going to the guild but he saw Gray killing the werewolf dragon slayer Natsu was. All fired up for this match so he was like ah you must not kill him Gray that dragon slayer mine Gray. Natsu did his must popular move fire dragon iron fist the werewolf dragon slayer did his werewolf dragon slayer roar. But Gray quickly Gray moved in with his NON DRAGON SLAYER MOVE because Gray not a dragon slayer he did ice make hammer then the werewolf was still ok then he escaped then some old man chopped him up with magic wood cutter power he said I rember u from my wife little red riding hood u did it now u must die and never live again then. Suddenly a portal came then a guy came out it was Naruto Taytumium Natsu ran then he Popped out then he just blow up the werewolf body the end.

  6. Mia says:

    Anyway, the pledge says you have to follow the footsteps of your guardian or parent. The royals and the rebels are two very different groups of people. You have the royals who are all fancy and love their stories. Then you have the rebels who are the enemies or you could say the un-royal so they don’t have royal blood. Apple’s BFTFF (best fairy tale friend forever) is Brie Beauty. You can probably guess who her mother is… raven and apple, two totally different fairy tales have to share a dorm room. Whereas, raven was going to share with her BFTFF Maddie hatter who is also a rebel. This was a total fairy FAIL for raven. Apple is the most popular fairy tale in school. And then you’ve got raven who everyone is scared of. Raven doesn’t want to be bad….. and she doesn’t want to follow the pledge….

  7. Harry says:

    The Stanley Alfie and Nahin the three little pigs was too big to live in my house said mum! The fox blew off and knocked down all three houses and the houses aren’t safe anymore the foxes chased everyone! The pigs had, had enough and decided to eat the foxes and had a huge party.

  8. Faith says:

    Little grey riding wolf
    There was a little family of wolves living in a little cottage in the woods! The mother and father wolf sent their oldest son into the largest city, they warned him to be careful off the big bad riding hood family!
    So the eldest son (called low) set off for the big city. On the way he did not notice that the big bad riding hood was following him! He finally arrived, big bad hood got to his grandmother’s house first and ate her and dressed in her clothes! As he opened the door big bad hood squeaked come in my dear.
    “Are you sure you’re alright grandmother”
    “Yes I am because I am going to eat”
    He chased him all around the cottage then the baker cause and wacked her with a hard bun she puked up the grandma and passed out! Then they had a picnic in the garden and invited the baker; he bought biscuits, buns, bread, rolls and cakes and cupcakes! They had the best time ever: it was so good it lasted for days. The end

  9. David says:

    The three little pigs
    Once upon a time there were three little pigs. The first was named Steve who built his house out of straw. The second pig was named Alfie and he made his house out of sticks and wood. The final pig was named David and his house was built out of bricks. One day a wolf came and completely scared the heck out of the pigs into their houses. The wolf, for some reason, politely knocked on the door. “Little pig, can I come in please?” The wolf asked with a smile. “No way!” Steve answered, so angry he would scream at the wolf. So the wolf went to the next house and knocked on the door. “Can I come in please?” The wolf asked. “GET OFF MY LAWN!” Alfie shouted with a complete angry face. The wolf realized the he should go to the third house and went there. This time David let him in but he unleashed his inner wolf, ate David and lived happily ever after.

  10. Stanley says:

    Once upon a time there was a cruel crooked little girl named the black queen and she was on a stroll in a forest when she saw a woodcutter! She approached and said “why hello what are you doing?” but before the woodcutter could answer the black queen she snatched the chainsaw and chased him with it but she didn’t catch him. She carried on strolling through the forest as if nothing had happened. Then she approached another queen called little red riding hood she said “hi” in her ridiculous stupid squeaky voice. So the black queen brutally punched and kicked her! And yet she still carried on as if nothing happened until she approached a wolf and threatened him and but the wolf stood up to her and gobbled her up!

  11. Lily says:

    Once upon a time there was a girl named sleeping Beauty. Sleeping Beauty was a princess, her nick name was called princess Arora. She was 16 years old. She lived with the mum the Queen her dad the King and her other sister called Nora, who was a princess too. Now this is the story of when sleeping Beauty fell in love, with a handsome prince.

    “Oh I do like to be a princess”. Said sleeping beauty. She was strolling down the castle garden, when she noticed something that was really scary. It was a group of men trying to attack a unicorn. Sleeping Beauty felt that she should defend the unicorn, but she was scared of herself getting hurt. “Wait”. Said sleeping Beauty worriedly. All of the men looked at sleeping Beauty. “Don’t hurt her.” Said sleeping Beauty.

    One man thought sleeping Beauty was very beautiful. Sleeping Beauty thought the man was handsome too. “ Why do you want kill the unicorn”. Asked sleeping Beauty. The man hesitated. “ Because there is meet to last us for a long time” Answered sleeping Beauty.

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